We received feedback from the class noting what was good, bad and what could have been improved.
The Good:
Relevant use of Black and White filter for flashbacks
Slow Motion to add for dangerous approach
Nice Artificial Gunshot SFX
Lucid, clear dialogue
Effective costumes
Guns considered tangible and perceptive
The Bad:
Lack of soundtrack
No tension due to no music
Slightly confusing shots at some points
Unclear why the main characters were innocent
Improvement:
Better story flow (so its easier to comprehend)
Pace could be a touch quicker
Some music would make it look interestingLabels: Josh Boothroyd, Lamo, vincent |
